英语大作文

2011考研英语作文经典分享！

2010年英语作文，一道火锅谈文化的试题“涮”倒了不少考生，但今年的英语大作文似乎是在意料之中，还是延续了漫画题的形式，考的是环境保护，对于这个话题，考生普遍熟悉，也有东西可写。小作文是推荐一部电影，如果是用中文写作，考生应该都很容易下手，但一用英语，“配音”、“特技”等专业术语就难住了考生，相比去年招募志愿者的小作文，今年的试题更难一些。

英语作文作为每年考研的难点，那么2012年的考生该如何去复习呢？

作文需要大量的背诵，然后是动笔写，有些同学只是依赖于背诵一些经典的范文，然后想着考试的时候直接默写背诵的好句子，其实到了真正的考场上才发现还是写不出来一个句子，只有我们在日常练习中把先前背诵的经典文章一些句子词汇灵活运用到我们的写作练习中，适当的加工改写成我们自己的句子，这样的学习效果才打到了，一味的完全的“拿来主义”并不能从根本上提高我们的写作水平，更可况考试话题只能说跟我们平时练习的话题有些接近，但是考查的角度会稍微有些偏差，亦或者是考查的话题是这个，而图表却和我们原来练习的另外一个话题的图表结构完全一样，这样我们就要将两者结合起来，把这个话题的描述性文字和另外一个话题的图表描述结合起来，再添加自己的想法，就是一篇新的文章了。

总之说这么多，就是提醒我们大家复习考研英语写作的时候不要单纯的只知道背诵相关话题的经典文章，而要在背诵的基础上多思考，这个经典句子我自己加工下，可以改写成另外一个话题的好句子，总结更多的对自己的写作有帮助的句子和词汇都是好的学习方法。记住书只是指导我们学习，而我们要充分发挥我们的主观能动性，这样才能将一本辅导书最佳的效果体现出来。

对于模板，我们可以自己在学习了一篇好的话题范文的基础上，自己总结一个模板，这样的模板是属于你一个人的，而很多书上总结的模板则是大家共享的，这样在考试时都用同一个模板的效果，自己也可想而知的，分数并不怎么理想的，当你运用自己总结的模板写作时，这个是独一无二的，自然得分也不低的。

就拿2011年的考研英语写作来说，

看着这个漫画，我们就会想到很多思路，如：从环境污染，人与环境，道德滑坡等等角度。但是这种思路就靠平时在看话题写作的时候，积累下来。如：《写作160篇》这类的话题写作，在看的过程中，掌握命题人思路，同时学习话题写作的思路。而且这本2011版的《写作160篇》不但命中了英语一的大小作文，而且还命中了英语二的大小作文。尤其是英语一的大作文，2011版的数篇范文从数个角度均命中了原题。如：从环境污染的角度看，2011版“重点预测50篇”中第36篇“人与环境”（第132页）与2011英语一原题思路完全一致；从道德滑坡的角度看，2011版经典必背20篇中第7篇“道德滑坡现象”（第37页）与此思路完全一致；从发展经济与保护环境的关系的角度看，2011版“快速浏览80篇”中第51篇“发展经济还是保护环境”(第222页)与此角度完全一致。

你先看看，不懂得再问我！主要是先熟悉在吧历年考题套一 遍，发现问题再及时解决！ 1 万用作文

（1） When it comes to XX, there is no agreement among people as to the issue of XX: some people hold a positive attitude towards it while others are against it. In such an environment where XX is playing an increasingly important role in XX, almost XX come to believe that XX talks. There are numerous reasons(methods/approaches) to account for the phenomenon ( 或者 to contribute to this issue), I would explore the most conspicuous ones below.

第二段：One of the primary reason（方法：method, to my mind, is that such a phenomenon as revealed in the picture （topic/ problem）has aroused wide-spread social concern ,Nowhere in history has the issue been talked about so much as in our society today. Apart from that, the painting（topic/ problem） reveals an upsetting story and similar events happened and happening are hared or reported in nearly all

aspects of our life .What is also worth noticing (considering) fact is that Enhancing people’s awareness of such practices and setting up relevant rules and regulations ought to be top priorities of the agenda.

第三段：In conclusion, taking into account of the above(或 In brief, we may safety (safely) arrive at the conclusion that), we may reach the conclusion that it is high time that such stories were (should be) terminated or at least reduced. Only when such

happenings come to an end can we maintain a happy and harmonious society as we all wish, vice and verse.

基础 -- 核心句写作

重要性说明：核心句写作是考研小作文和大作文的核心部分，也是临场发挥成分最大的部分，所以一定要花时间好好练习。

A． 小作文一般是应用文，包括各种书信（道歉，投诉，咨询，申请，辞职，感谢，安慰，推荐），通知和工作备忘

录。不过考的是上述的哪一种，写作的重点都是要把事由用一句话写清楚，这句话就是我们现在要训练的核心句写作。

B． 大作文近几年考的都是看图说话，所以2006靠的很可能也是图画文章。这就要求我们文章第一段学会用一句话

描述清楚图画的内容，这句话也就是我们现在要训练的核心句写作。

C． 即便大作文不考图画作文，也一定是议论文。者也要求我们在第一段能用一句话就说清楚要评论的事物或现象，

这句话也是我们现在要训练的核心句写作。

____________, 主语，_____________, 谓语 （及物动词后加宾语），_________. 具体步骤 步骤1：看清图画的主要含义，并因此确定S + V .（或者S + Vt + n）迅速写出句子。每幅图一句。 （此步重点：确定主语，也就是抓住图画中最主要的事物是关键，一般这一事物居于图画正中间） 例如 A lamp is flickering.

步骤2.围绕图片主语列出所有的细节并添加到句子当中，包括：

1.找出可以修饰主语的形容词（单个的放在主语前边）A small oil lamp is flickering. 2.找出主语的同位语后加定语从句 （主语后）A small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light , is flickering. 3.找出可以修饰主语的介词短语 （主语后边）A small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering. 4.找出主语发出的其它动作，做成伴随状语，放在主语前做导入Standing lonely but full of confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering.

步骤3 围绕谓语展开细节并添加到句子当中，包括：

1.找出可修饰动作的副词，放在谓语后Standing lonely but full of confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly.

2.看看动作发生的时间和地点可不可以用介词短语来做，放谓语及副词的后边，地点在前，时间在后Standing lonely but full of confidence, a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the time.

3.看看句子谓语动作造成什么结果或意义没有，如果有，做成后置的伴随状语Standing lonely but full of confidence , a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the time，bringing brightness to everything around it.

4.如果谓语动作没有造成什么结果或意义，看看有没有其它的主谓结构可以做成主或伴随状语，来把谓语动作细节化。

步骤4 如果谓语后有宾语，再按主语扩展模式略作处理（加前后定语，尽量短）

最终版本：Standing lonely but full of confidence , a small oil lamp , the only object that gives off light in the picture, is flickering quietly in the darkness all the time，bringing brightness to everything around it. （37字） 大家再看一个例子，进一步熟悉一下以上四个步骤 中外文化的融合图片描述

1. An American girl appears pleasant.

2. A beautiful young American girl appears pleasant. 3. A beautiful young American girl, an international student, appears pleasant. 4. A beautiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed in traditional Chinese costume, appears pleasant. 5. Standing under a tree, a beautiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed in traditional Chinese costume, appears pleasant.

6. Standing under a tree, a beautiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed in traditional Chinese costume,

appears obviously pleasant. 总结：通过以上四个步骤，从定主谓入手，通过添加细节，迅速制造出一个30-40字左右的好句子作为大作文开头。

在小作文当中，也是利用同样的方法，迅速的说明事由，细节的添加主要以回答下列几个问题为主：谁（who）在什么时候（when）在什么地方（where）出于何种原因（why）通过何种方式(how)作了什么事情（what） 例如：投诉信：---对两条狗进行投诉

1. These dogs were abandoned and have been causing trouble.

2. These vicious dogs were abandoned and have been causing trouble. 3. These vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought, were abandoned and have been causing trouble. 4. These vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have been causing trouble.

5. Last week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were

abandoned and have been causing trouble.

6. Last week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were

abandoned and have been causing trouble in our neighborhood ever since. 7. Last week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were

abandoned and have been causing trouble in our neighborhood ever since, barking day and night, leaving waste everywhere, and even attacking both residents and passers-by. (44字) 下面，请大家按照刚才讲述的步骤练习写下面的句子，这是作文成功的关键，最后冲刺的几天，请一定多练 1． 起点就是终点 （提示：主语是男孩，谓语是跑向终点）

2． 温室的花朵第一幅 （提示：主语是花朵，谓语是挺立）

3． 温室的花朵第二幅 （提示：主语还是花朵，谓语是变得虚弱） 4． 把上两句话用 -------------， while ----------- 的模式连成一句

5． 商业捕鱼 （提示：前半句：主语是鱼，谓语是游泳 后半句：主语还是鱼，谓语是存活。两句中间用while连接） 6． 母鸡承诺 （提示：主语是母鸡，谓语是举着，宾语是牌子） 7． 道歉 （提示：主语是我，谓语是我当时做的事）

8． 咨询 （提示：主语是我，谓语是想知道，宾语是要了解的问题） 9． 辞职 （提示：主语是我，谓语是辞职） 10． 感谢 （提示：主语是你，谓语是你做过的事） 11． 安慰 （although你做了不好的事，你要看到好的方面） 12． 推荐 （被推荐的人作主语，主要成就作谓语） 13． 通知 （ 14． 工作备忘录 15． 申请 16． 投诉 2． 小作文模板

联系完核心句写作，小作文的模板就出来了 A．书信 Dear…. （第1句）I am …….and am writing to apologize for../ inquire../ inform you of my decision / express my gratitude to you for…/ express my sympathy for…/ recommend …/ apply for…/complain about….. （第2句）核心句 （第3句）your kind and prompt consideration will be highly appreciated. Yours:…….. B．通知

（第1句）核心句

（第2句）Your presence (或attendance) is cordially requested and your criticism sincerely solicited.

C．邀请函

（第1句）核心句

邀请人requests the pleasure of the presence (或company) of 被邀请人 at the dinner(具体场合)

（第2句） R.S.V.P.(敬请回复)即可

3. 大作文模板 （一）开头段落：

大作文根据图画的内容分成两种：比喻意义的图画和实际意义的图画。在描述时略有不同： 实际意义的图画（如：商业捕鱼，赡养老人。。）：

文章第1段 ：核心句 （一句写清楚图画内容）

文章第2段：直接进行讨论（写作方法下面再谈）。

比喻意义的图画（如：母鸡，花朵，跑步的小孩，小灯。。）

文章第1段 ：核心句 （一句写清楚图画内容）

文章第2段： 先用下边的句子指出图画比喻义再进行讨论（写作方法下面再谈）。

A （比喻义）is just like B （图画中的形象）depicted in the picture above.

例如：True love is just like the lamp depicted in the picture above.

Some profiteers are just like the hen depicted in the picture above.

The truly successful people are just like the running boy depicted in the picture above.

（二）第二段 讨论方法：

迅速分析图画的含义，然后确定这个含义是好事还是坏事。确定好之后就可以选择逻辑行进模式了。 坏事：

指出坏事所指出具体分析根源指出后果用假设的方法提

在的范畴 坏的做法 （两句） （两句） 出一个解决方案

好事：

以个人为例，重申说出好事指出没有

指出好事 指出好事没有它的后果 的作用（两它的后果

在受关注 句） （一句）

具体操作  坏事：

指出坏事所指出具体分析根源指出后果用假设的方法提

在的范畴 坏的做法 （两句） （两句） 出一个解决方案

下面的演示中，每一部分上边的是大家必须背会的模板，下边的是以2005考研作文为例作的示范。

指出坏事所It is universally held that sth (写上最宽泛的主题)is one of the key words of our modern time.

在的范畴 It is universally held that ageing is one of the key words of our modern time. Unfortunately, however, when considering this key concept, a growing number of sb. have neglected ……., a serious problem which is presented in the picture and which is viewed with 指出具体 growing concern nationwide(worldwide). 坏的做法 Unfortunately, however, when considering this key concept, a growing number of people have neglected a respect and care for their elders, a serious problem which is presented in the picture and which is viewed with growing concern nationwide.

Needless to say, sth is an important factor in contributing to this social problem. 分析根源

Needless to say, some certain weaknesses in our education of the children are an important factor （第一句）

in contributing to this social problem.

What is so-called sth in most ones’ eyes is not A, but B. 分析根源 What is so-called child education in most parents’ eyes is not a balanced development of all the （第二句） child’s nature including attainment of mental, emotional, physical and spiritual well-being, but of a high IQ combined with a physically healthy body.

Due to this reason, sb may do sth, but they never do sth.

指出后果Due to this reason, the children may be taught enough knowledge, but they are never sufficiently

（第一句） taught what moral value they should have.

They may do sth, but they never do sth. 指出后果

They may receive ample love from their parents, but they never learn to pay it back when their （第二句）

parents are old. If sb were fully awake to this consequence and realized that sth are not all about sth’, they would 用假设的方法提lay more stress on sth, and therefore would not do sth. 出一个解决方案 If parents were fully awake to this consequence and realized that knowledge and intelligence are not all about child education, they would lay more stress on their children’s emotional development, and therefore would not be so ill-treated by their children when they grow old.

要求：熟背此模板，并将其应用到下面的文章当中，一定要多写几篇，才能灵活掌握 1． 商业捕鱼 （提示：发展是好的，可是有些人在追求利益的同时却忽视了环境保护的重要性）

2． 温室的花朵 （提示：教育是好的，可是有些父母在教育孩子的时候只注意提供好的环境，却忽视了孩子能力培养） 3． 商家的承诺 （提示：承诺是好的，可是有些商人夸大本是自己份内职责的事情去追求利益的同时，却忽视了承诺的真正含义）

 好事：

以个人为例，重申说出好事指出没有

指出好事 指出好事没有它的后果 的作用（两它的后果

在受关注 句） （一句）

下面的演示中，每一部分上边的是大家必须背会的模板，下边的是以“爱是一盏灯”为例作的示范。

It is universally held that sth (写上最宽泛的主题)is one of the key words of our modern time.

指出好事 It is universally held that love is one of the key words of our modern time.

And fortunately, this significance of this important concept is becoming appreciated by a growing number of people in our society, enlightening those in the dark and pointing forward to a brighter future of the mankind. 指出好事And fortunately, this significance of this important concept is becoming appreciated by a 在受关注

growing number of people in our society, enlightening those in the dark and pointing forward to a brighter future of the mankind.

说出好事的作

用（第一句） It is the consciousness of sth that …;

It is the consciousness of love that makes us reach our hands and pull those in need out of

difficulty. it is also sth that … 说出好事的作用it is also love that helps us realize that this world is a harmonious whole, requiring all who live in （第二句） it to work together, laugh together and even suffer together. Without this necessary habit in all public affairs of a civilized society, nothing could ever 指出没有它的 be achieved and everything will be in a chaos. 后果 Without this necessary habit in all public affairs of a civilized society, nothing could ever be achieved and everything will be in a chaos. Therefore, a person with no idea of love, most people believe, is an unfortunate failure in the 重申 以个人为例，21centry, deprived of one of the most valuable intrinsic qualities they should possess. 没有它的后果 Therefore, a person with no idea of love, most people believe, is an unfortunate failure in the 21centry, deprived of one of the most valuable intrinsic qualities they should possess. 要求：熟背此模板，并将其应用到下面的文章当中，一定要多写几篇，才能灵活掌握

1． 终点就是起点 （提示，人们追求更好的想法是人类进步的巨大推动） （三）第三段 写作模板 提解决方案， 分个人和社会两句来写  坏事 Once convinced of the seriousness and urgency of this issue, sb should seek to dispel their misunderstanding and put the cultivation of a more rational attitude on the agenda of 个人 priority. In addition to the effort on the part of the individual, the government and departments Once convinced of the seriousness and urgency of this issue, sb should seek to dispel their 社会 concerned should also assume their own responsibility, pass relevant regulations and put misunderstanding and put the cultivation of a more rational attitude on the agenda of them into force. priority. In addition to the effort on the part of the individual, the government and departments

concerned should also assume their own responsibility, pass relevant regulations and put

them into force.

 好事 Realizing the important role played by…….in our life, we should seek to fully appreciate its true meaning and put the cultivation of a good habit / attitude on the agenda of priority.

Realizing the important role played by love in our life, we should seek to fully appreciate its true meaning and put the cultivation of a good habit / attitude on the agenda of priority.

个人

In addition, the government and departments concerned, once convinced of the benefit that

sth brings, should assume their own responsibilities and take necessary measures to foster 社会

this underlying current.

In addition, the government and departments concerned, once convinced of the benefit that

sth brings, should assume their own responsibilities and take necessary measures to foster

this underlying current.

结束语：本方案提出的大作文模板只有两套，希望能尽量较少大家的准备难度。请大家自己整理好这两套方案，熟练背诵，然后要大量实践，至少写上十篇模拟题，争取一个主题写一篇。有什么问题，请抓紧联系我。时间仓促，我已经尽了最大努力，下边的一步就靠大家自己啦！祝大家成功。

大作文：

（1）正面（正确、积极的）：01、02、03、08、10 反面（不正确的做法、消极）：04、05、06、07、09、11 （2）一幅图还是两幅图（04、06） （3）作文有无规定题目（仅02）

（4）1st：描述图画，2nd:解释图画要表达的含义，3rd：严重性及采取的举措。 例如：2011环境污染；2010：一个火锅——多种文化 ＊2012重点预测正面

What the image is trying to express is symbolic and philosophic ! Featured in the above illustration are large numbers of people who , sitting in front of computer , are placed in separate rooms . However ridiculous and humorous it may seem at first glimpse, this cartoon does carry rather significant implications .

Evidently, the cartoonist aims to enlighten us that we should keep a balance between interenet communication and face-to-face .A great deal of attention is being paid today to internet . Indeed , it has long been know that using the internet in a proper way should be great emphasized ,if we want to construct a harmonious word . to our disappointment , however ,with an ever-developing of science and technology ,people in mounting numbers tend to neglect the seriousness of this problem . hence people’s emotional distance in becoming larger and larger .

keeping a balance between internet communication and face-to-face , to my mind , is not simply good for individuals , but also beneficial to the whole society . Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched so as to enhance people’s awareness of the importance of using internet in a proper way .Only by concerted efforts , can we embrace a happy , healthy and harmonious world , as we all wish , in the long run !

一种事物或现象（正面意义倾向）(第一段黄色为：is a hot pot，which is a symbol of the world.二三段的中心词换为：cultural

communication)

第一段：套话+图片描述+套话

What the drawing is trying to express is symbolic and philosophic ! （并列押韵，可以说是有用的废话）Featured in the above image are two men who , each of them having only one leg , are running forward together. （妙在featured和who，插入的主格结构。这句话是得分重点，需要自己组织一个简单的切题的句子。）However ridiculous and humorous（押韵） it may seem at first glimpse ,this cartoon does carry rather significant implications . （可以认为是有用的废话.）

第二段：主题句+深入阐述+分条阐述+分条阐述 1、Evidently , the purpose of the illustration is to mirror the fact that teamwork （中心词）is essential to achieving success .（第一句，这是揭示主题的句子，大家的句型百变不离其宗。也是得分重点.）2、Indeed, a great deal of attention is being paid today to （这个句型是某年阅读理解的第一句）cooperation , which has profound implications for both individual and whole society .（第二句，这是一个长句子，同时也是一个概括句，改卷老师看到你思路清晰。） 3、First and foremost ,in this world of change and complexity, the need for teamwork is of the greatest importance , if one want to realize dreams . (第三句，分述)4、In addition , our country as a whole also could not afford to part with（这个句型是我从某年阅读理解里借用过来的） teamwork spirit，if we are ever （这个单词可以不要，不过我看到真题里有这个用法，单词简单，但是用法深奥，应该是比较地道的英语。我想改卷老师一定很喜欢。）going to move forward in terms of politics , economy , culture and society .（第四句，分述）

第三段：评论

Teamwork spirit ,in my view , is not simply good for individuals , but also beneficial to the whole society .（此句是插入+并列） Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched so as to enhance people’s awareness of the importance of teamwork spirit .（转折句，是我从徐绽的作文书里总结归纳的。）Only by concerted efforts , can we embrace a happy , healthy and harmonious world , as we all wish , in the long run ! （强调句，高联的辅导班讲过这个句型，强调+并列+插入）

2012考研大作文万能模板---英语一

第一段 3句话

①In the picture above,...... .第一句话（句型要用do+ing\\with短语+非限定性定语从句）要将整个漫画内容描述完整。 要考验大家的语法功底，首句很重要哦！ ②There has been a heated discussion about them in the newspaper. 第二句就是套话，大家也可以自己换其他自己喜欢的句子。

③The picture , at the first glimpse , seem to be simple ,but only a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficial meaning. 同第二句解释的一样。

第二段 6句话

记住：写作重点就在此段，因为大多数考研者都会把首尾段写得出色，但仅此这打动不了阅卷老师，比的就是谁的第二段写得漂亮，谁就获得高分的机会大。

①The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with the (漫画主题词 ) / nothing is more harmful or damaging than the ( 主题词) . 当时漫画反映坏/好的方面的主题时，大家相应地进行替换。纵观2001-2011年的漫画都是如此，大家不用太怀疑。

②In no country other than China ,it has been said ,is this phenomenon more obvious （好的主题用此句）. / is the problem of (有关主题词) more serious （坏的主题用此句）.

③What's more,nobody dare fail to / the public fail to attach due attention to the ( 主题词 ) . 进一步强调主题的好/坏 。

④By doing so ,....... . 给出反映主题的相应的理由，这句话也要各位写得好，才有打动阅卷的老师给高分的心 ，我只能作为指引。

⑤It will cultivate an optimistic /pessimistic view toward the world and extends people's life expectancy . 给出自己的结论，好写，套话 。

⑥Were the situation to continue as it is, we would pay the higher price .

最后一句，虚拟语气结尾，增添文章句型多变的色彩 。

第三段

这段可以完全是套话了，大家可以自己选择喜欢的，把握一点就行：3句话，做到句型复杂多变，反映主题。

①In summary,while some people may remain unconvinced by my discussion,but the analysis I have offered so far should at least make them aware of the significance of this phenomenon .

②Therefore , the general public is supposed to enhance their awareness that ( cultural exchange 2010年主题词), to a great degree , plays an importance role in our lives .

③Only in a reasonable ,prosperous and healthy atmosphere ,can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people will enjoy ( their life ) to the uttermost .

考研英语作文模板

As is vividly depicted in the picture, ，which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts. The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, ， Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主题 which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity. This phenomenon of 主题 should be condemned severely or made illegal. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测危害的趋势

(1) To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward. (2)To begin with,主题 not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than主题 to contradict with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主题 to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. (5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . (6)According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主题will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something.

最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法

(1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent主题. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something. (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.

As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述图画).(2) The most striking feature is(图画重点信息). There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重复上面的图画信息) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency. Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic. No better illustration of this idea can be

thought than the example mentioned below. A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.

From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.

As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above (开始描述图画）， 加上which is both upsetting and most thought-provoding (第一端）描述图画

The aim of the painter of the drawing above can be briefly stated as follow (陈述观点 ） 可以把这些话加到作文中去 结合作文内容

perhapers no other things could gain more public attention than...in china for the time being .