2015一模英语习作（杨浦区）：
In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic “The best gift I’ve received”. (以“我收
到的最好的礼物”为题写一篇60-120个词的短文，标点符号不占格) The following are for reference only. (以下问题仅供参考): 1. What is the gift? Who was it from? 2. What is the gift like?
3. Why do you like it so much? 4. What makes it so special?
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辅导：
1、 要简要写清楚最好的礼物是什么？怎么得到的？ 2、 一定要写清楚理由，至少两点。 3、 要有抒情，体现感恩
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范文：
The best gift I've received
Of all the gifts I've received, the Walkman is the best. My father bought it for me as my birthday present last year. Since then, it has always been with me. When I wake up every morning, I turn it on to listen to English .With it, my English has improved. Besides, I usually use my Walkman to listen to light music. It makes me relaxed, especially after a whole day's busy studying. The Walkman is really useful and it is full of Dad’s love to me. So it is no doubt the best gift I've received and I'll treasure it forever.
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